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Rage of the Raven

The Raven cries out loud, "You will not take me Down!
I fight for what is right and will always be around.
You think you know the score. You think that you are right.
Well let me tell you something I am going to win this fight.
I will take on all the fakes who lie to all the young.
You think that this is over? Well the fight has just begun.
You say that I am evil. You tell me that I am sad.
Well I am the one who helps. You should not make me mad.
I fight for what is good. I fight for what is right.
I will fight you threw the day and all threw the night.
So you better not be phony. You better not be fake.
Cause I'll be right behind you running in your wake.
I am really not that awful. I am a very nice one.
But I will not rest until all my work is done."

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Posted by goldbrickdreams on 09/26/2007 1:58 PM

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	goldbrickdreams: 09/26/2007 2:28 PM Can you guess who i wrote this for?
	buriedwreckage: 09/26/2007 2:35 PM Umm for ravenblackhardt perhaps. Anyway, I love it, it's awesome.
	goldbrickdreams: 09/26/2007 2:59 PM What gave it away? ;)
	buriedwreckage: 09/26/2007 3:02 PM Umm, the title and the tag.. lol..
	bizarreland: 09/26/2007 5:25 PM Edward this is wonderful it rhymes so well.......Only one correction threw is spelled through, then it will be perfect....but I sucked in english big time...........Bee : )
	Millie Ann: 09/26/2007 5:37 PM This is awesome, Baby. I love it!
	ravenblackhardt: 09/27/2007 3:03 PM WOW you rock my socks! I'm sorry I didnt get here sooner! Thanks Ed! R
	vitruvianwoman: 09/28/2007 10:01 AM Hey thank you for the BUZZ and the comment. -Dani
	vitaminj: 09/29/2007 7:57 PM i love your poetry its free and open very vunerable. it reminds me of an open sea of thougts and emotions will you do me a favor and maybe read a few of mine vitaminj.. thanks.. your timeless in a world full of clocks.. that are ticking.. tick tock tick tock.. and its all you can hear all you can hear in your the pounding of your inner ear...
	goldbrickdreams: 09/30/2007 4:26 AM ravenblackhardt said: WOW you rock my socks! I'm sorry I didnt get here sooner! Thanks Ed! R i am happy to see you like. You are a very good friend to both Millie Ann and i. i may rock your socks, but you rock the house.
	goldbrickdreams: 09/30/2007 4:29 AM vitaminj said: i love your poetry its free and open very vunerable. it reminds me of an open sea of thougts and emotions will you do me a favor and maybe read a few of mine vitaminj.. thanks.. your timeless in a world full of clocks.. that are ticking.. tick tock tick tock.. and its all you can hear all you can hear in your the pounding of your inner ear... That clock that tick tocks the tick tock in the ear sends rhyme in poem to mind to the eye to see what to write of that clock that does the tick tock.
	keepxthexfaith: 10/10/2007 4:33 PM Nicely done. Love the fact that its for Raven., What an awesome lady. I love the way you wrote this, and the way in which it rhymes. It sounds very much like something Raven would say before a big battle. And we all know who would win! xx Jay

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