Lost In Stereo:chapeter one.


this is my first writing experience, so if you like comment and if you hate it im sorry. enjoy!

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"shit I'm sorry"

"yeah it's fine,whatever ass."

"jeez, girly i don't even know your name."

"its Nicole, i'm sorry for being a bitch i'm just lost and new and dont know where the hell to go."

"okay okay, clam down let me help you. lets see here we have art together which starts in like two minutes, lets go. then we have gym together and lunch, but then sadly we part ways for the afternoon".

"what makes you so sure I'm going to be sad when we part", i said with a wink.

he blushed not knowing what to say.

"come on nicole sit next to me."

"fine" it was less then an half hour and i was already was falling for this guy.art class was such a blowoff class, all we did was talk. jack and i played twenty questions to get to know each other better.

"favorite band"?

"blink, forsure"

"me too"

"favorite song"?

"adam song," i said

"you got to be kidding me adam song it great in all,but Dammit come on now"

"yeah your right, that does win.well, you have two questions left"

"can I please have your number"?

"Mmmm, I'll think about it."

"pweaseee"

"fine, I gave in".I handed him my crappy cell phone. he programmed he name under: future husband.

i guess i blushed, cause jack made fun of me.

"shut up jerk! what your last question"?

"hahah,you blush and I'm going to save it for something special".

the bell rang and off to gym we went.

"farewell my lady,go change into your finest gym clothes".

"hah, wait where is the girls locker room?"

"go down that hallway and turn right, the sign is broken but thats it".

"thankkk you. I said turing into the locker room."

Jacks POV

I already really liked Nicole, she was smart and funny plus she was really hott. i felt like we clicked. i hope she can take a joke.

Nicole POV

"get the fuck out of the guys locker room you stupid whore, what you can't read."

"shit im sorry".

"ugh i'm going kill you jack,i screamed half running toward him".

-class clam down, run three miles,NOW.

"hey running buddy,as I elbowed jack in the ribs. your a jerk you know?"

"you love me, say it say it  SAY IT."

"I FUCKING LOVE YOU, happy?"

"yessirre"

the fact was that i think i really did love jack, i know that sounds stupid i barely knew him, but what i did know about him i loved.

"come on fatty,pick those feet up".

"shut up,nicole!"

"hahah,slow poke."

gym ended thank God. i thought i was going to die if i ran anymore.

Jack POV

"hey guys this is Nicole."

HEYYY NICOLE, they all said like five year olds.

"hah, who is who?"

"im Alex".

"im Rian, this is Kira my girlfriend."

"im Zach"

"cool. like how do you all know each other?"

we are all in a band

"sweet! i have a think for guys in bands, i said as winked at jack."

"hahah jacks got a new fuck buddy, alex screamed."

"fuck you bro, shes not my fuck buddy,yet" i heard hims say under his breathe, but i really didnt care.

the lunch bell rang and the rest of the day went by pretty quick.

after school i walked home, it was friday and i had no plans, GREAT. i got home about like ten minutes later. i took a shower, adn just laid on my bed to i felt my phone vibrate.

-Future Husband-

Im coming to pick you up in ten minutes

for why?

drinking and band practice.

okay.

I started to get ready right away since i only had like eight minutes to get ready. i just put on my make up and skinny jeans when i heard the door bell ring. forgetting i only had on my skinny jeans and skannky bra i opened the door to jack looking at me half naked.

"shit", i slamed the door.

"hah its cool"

"i hate you, give me like three more minutes and i will be fully clothed."

"your no fun."

 

about four minutes later i was getting into alex's car. a little pick up truck that barely worked, but i was better than nothing.

"bro you already saw her tits, high five."

i flicked them both off.

the car ride was short, i found out i live two blocks away from zach.

i took my seat next to Kira, who i really wanted to talk to about jack.

"hey  hey"

"whats up nicole"

"can i ask you a question?"

"yeah, shoot"

"okay like i know it has been a week, but do you think that jack would ever like me?"

"are you joking right now?"

"um no why? does he have a girlfriend?"

"hah, no he's like in love with you."

 

shit, that couldnt be true like he never showed it, it was a whole week of school and not once did he show that he was even a little bit interested at all. hmmm maybe he is shy?

"hey what this shit band called anyways?"

"fuck me harder," alex teased

"wow, immature, its called all time low", zach snapped.

"hey jacko, pass me a beer", i said a little worried.

"whats up"?

"um i really have never drank before"

"oh shit we got a newbe with us". jack mangaed to scream.

lets get her wasted,jack said with a wink to me.

the guys sang songs for like an hour and the rest of the night was a blurr. all i know is that i woke up in someone else house with a huge headache. this year is going to be great.the weeks went by and jack still didnt show any interest at all, maybe i was doing something wrong? we just became better friends, alex and kira were like my family.

two moths later

"hey bitch its halloween, we gunna get crunk?"

"hell yes," i was getting good at drinking every weekend."what are the plans mr.Barakat?"

"okay were going to have a coustum party and get drunk."

"okay, well see you later i gotta go get my costum, its a day before halloween."

i hung up with jack and called Kira right abway,we NEEDED coustumes.

kira and I, went to the coustume store. we tried on tons of coustumes.

she choose and sexy nurse, when i decided to dress up as lady gaga.


HAllOWEEN NIGHT.

JACK POV

i picked up nicole about ten minutes early so i just parked the car and waited.

about ten minutes later, she came storming out of her house crying, what the fuck?

jack clam down, you can do this be a good friend, keep it together.


"whats wrong"?

"fucking mom, is whats wrong!" i half yelled at him

im sorry lets talk. lets walk to the park.

"fine lets just go", she was pissed off

"im worried about you nicole whats wrong"

"fucking mom, like honestly i cant do this shit anymore."

"what the fuck?, talk to me," i kinda yelled at her.

"im leaving i dont need you yelling at me either, fuck it"

i grabbed her arm kinda hard and pulled her toward me. she winced in pain?

"nicole Jacobsin, is why your sad/angry"

"fuck off"

"no does she hit you"?

"yeah a lot, i tried to keep it from you, but i cant anymore" I completly lost it.

she was completly broken inside, i needed to save her fast.

"what the fuck from now tell me everything,even when you get your period"

"really?, too much"

"haha yeah i went a little to far, but do you understand me, young lady"

"yes sir".

NICOLES POV.

jack always knew how to make me feel better,his way of words made me smile automaticly.

who the fuck is calling me now?

casa,popped up on my phone.

"hello", i said wipping my last tears away.

"dad,dad? slow down im coming right now what?"


 

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okay well that wasnt as good as i thought i would be but i promise it will get better. i hope you liked it. comment please, i dont think "Lost in stereo" is a good title so if you have a better one, TELL ME.


 



Posted by xcubbies38x on 11/04/2009 6:06 PM Visits: 44
Ellie Johnson: 11/06/2009 1:30 PM
have you ever heard of quotation marks?
xcubbies38x: 11/07/2009 11:12 AM
mhmm I think i have? besides the whole no quotation marks, is it good?
Ellie Johnson: 11/07/2009 12:08 PM
honestly, i have no idea whats going on this story since there are no quotation marks.
taylorcanavan: 11/07/2009 2:27 PM
its good, just hard to understand without the quotation marks
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